In
the park Jane saw a scary sculpture. It looked like a pot with a face. On the
head it had some legs with blood. Jane thought yuck. Jane went back the next
day. It had moved a little. Jane thought
a witch was controlling it. She hardly thought about it. In the Newspaper the
next day it said people in the park started to go missing. So Jane went back.
It had moved again “I don’t know what’s happening”. She felt something kicking
her. “Aahhr”. It was the mean sculpture. He picked Jane up. “I will eat you Jane”.
Hello Emilee,
ReplyDeleteWhat a mysterious and scary scupture was lurking in the park in your story. As I read your story, I also wondered what might be causing the strange events. Leaving us with a mystery is a good way of inviting your readers to use their imaginations to complete the story. I'm hoping Jane escapes and raises the alarm so the police can capture the mean sculpture. Well done, Emilee. :)
Have you taken the opportunity to visit the entries of students from other schools? It is interesting to see how others have approached the prompt. Don’t forget to leave them a comment if you do visit. :)
I hope you keep entering the 100WC.
Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia